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Post by Whyte Phoenix on Sept 26, 2005 16:21:08 GMT -5
From now on, please post your applications here... *has nothing more to say*
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Post by kilisa09 on Sept 26, 2005 17:22:52 GMT -5
Ok....I joined now, now what? I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I was told to cometh hereth, from Neopets. I will say nothing more.
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Post by Mullet Fish on Sept 26, 2005 19:53:19 GMT -5
Heh. This was the idea I was going to tell you about in that PM, but my train of thought got derailed by the awesome effects of Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children.
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Post by lonehuntress17 on Sept 27, 2005 21:33:06 GMT -5
OOC: Well since there is a new spot for it I thought that I would post my audition again here now.
Aryan walks slowly home from her job at the nightclub, her flute case tucked under her right arm. It's around 1:00 in the morning and she is tired, looking forward to her warm and soft bed. She decides to take a short cut home down an old alley not thinking of the time or the state of her neighborhood. She gets about half way down the alley when she hears a noise coming from behind her. She pauses and turns around slowly noticing that the alley is now blocked by two figures. “Kind of late for a lady like yourself to be out” one of the figures speak in threatening tone. Aryan tenses and glances behind looking for an escape rout. Only to find it blocked by one other figure, “Well, well, well, looks like we will have ourselves a little fun tonight after all boys” says the gruff male voice from behind. Sweat begins to pour down Aryan's back as she realizes the error of this short cut. Slowly they advance upon her. She roughly thrown against a wall her flute falling to the ground, she gazes down at it in panic. “Look I don't have much money but you can have it all, if you will just please let me go.” She pleads. They laugh in unison one of them groping her body, “Now who said we wanted any money” his voice rasps in her ear. She grits her teeth and looks up to the sky as she feels them tear at her shirt. For some reason her eyes land on the moon, it's not quite full but it seems that would be its next phase. She does not know why but all she can do is think of how beautiful the moon looks tonight. Then she feels an inner pulse in her body…almost like it's coming from within her very soul. She can feel her body as it shifts and changes becoming larger and stronger. “What the f**k!” exclaim the three punks who were harassing her. Paralyzed with fear they just stand and watch as she changes into what could only be a humanoid wolf. Completing her transformation she howls to the moon and turns on her three would be attackers. She is no longer of the same mind as her beast side takes command and she pounces on the stunned men. Their shrieks echo down the alley as she tears them to pieces feasting upon their warm flesh. Once done she walks over, kneels down and gingerly picks up her flute case; dusting it off. The she howls triumphantly as she speeds off into the night searching for a safe haven.
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Post by kilisa09 on Sept 28, 2005 18:27:40 GMT -5
Ok....I guess I'll post my audition in a second, hang on, but it's going to stink horribly.
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Post by Whyte Phoenix on Sept 28, 2005 18:31:49 GMT -5
Kilisa : I'll evaluate your thingymabober after I eat dinner, sorry.
Brad : Vazz was going to burn the movie for me, but he said it crashed. T_T ... I'll have to download it myself. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. *wishes she was there when the movie came out*
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Post by Mullet Fish on Sept 28, 2005 20:27:42 GMT -5
I forgot this is the application thread. Check out my thread in movies. Heh.
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Post by kilisa09 on Sept 29, 2005 19:09:46 GMT -5
Jyp was slammed against the wall, right next to the wanted poster depicting his face. He started at the man in front of him pinning him to the alley wall. "Where is it?" he growled at Jyp."What? Whaddaya mean? It's not my fault, I don't know!" He started babbling incoherently. The man snorted in anger and drew a dagger, placing it against the young cat-sprites nose. Jyp shut up immediately."Now, where is it?" the man asked again. Jyp, his footpaws dangling a few inches off the ground, shrugged, as much as he could, anyways. "What're you talking about?" he asked.
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Post by kilisa09 on Sept 29, 2005 19:10:18 GMT -5
((Is that ok, or what?))
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Post by Loloogy on Sept 30, 2005 17:32:15 GMT -5
Hmm... I still need to think of something. Teh creative bug isn't visiting me.
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Post by WP on Sept 30, 2005 18:33:12 GMT -5
Kilisa : Is that a reply to another person's RP or a start of a RP of your own ?
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Post by lonehuntress17 on Sept 30, 2005 21:23:30 GMT -5
I was just wondering whether or not my application has been approved? Or am I going to have write up something else and try again?
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Post by Whyte Phoenix on Oct 1, 2005 0:49:58 GMT -5
Lonehuntress : Gah. I'm very sorry... YES, your application is now offically approved and you're now a member of the Black Haven. Congratulations.
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Post by kilisa09 on Oct 2, 2005 15:41:00 GMT -5
No, my post is an application for...something-or-other. I'm waiting to see if it's approved.
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Post by Whyte Phoenix on Oct 2, 2005 15:59:24 GMT -5
Kilisa : Well, the post was good, but it was lacking in a few details... I couldn't really tell what Jyp was other than he's a cat-sprite. I couldn't tell what Jyp's other features were... (ex. Did he wear clothes? Fur color?)
Also, you could put in a little more detail than 'Alley wall' for a place description. There's plenty of alley walls in this world, the question is, which one ?
Right now, with this application, I wouldn't let you in the Black Haven... but if you add some more detail to your post, I might change my mind.
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