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Mar 27, 2005 1:22:32 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 1:22:32 GMT -5
Here are a few poems that I have made if you want to please rate them and post their ratings....Thanks!
You say you love me, But how can that be? You say I love you, When you really cry boo-hoo. How can I know when, You say your there then. You may lie to me, So let that be. I had once loved you with my heart, Then you go and beat me with a cart. How can I trust you? You say you love me but you do it all over again. When will you stop with all my pain? Never never again will you see me again. That was when I loved you. You would say the same to me. Now you blow me off, And act like you have a cough. It's over now So don't have a cow. I hate you, And you hate me. Good Bye now and forever.
My car is in the park Where it is in the Dark Making your mark Taking a small part Of my heart. Why do you use the cart? When you could use my car? To see my bar. I trusted you, When you let me down. I could have cried tears that would cover the town. I didn't so there, Why do you care?
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Mar 27, 2005 1:24:05 GMT -5
Post by insanity on Mar 27, 2005 1:24:05 GMT -5
Aaaah these poems are gonna make me sad
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Mar 27, 2005 1:35:17 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 1:35:17 GMT -5
aww I'm sorry I'll try to make Happy poems lol
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Mar 27, 2005 2:36:03 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 2:36:03 GMT -5
Would you believe me if I say I love you? Would you say the same back to me? Would you like go go as two? Would you trust me to catch you if you fall? Making it seem as if going to the mall? Would you have fun after breaking up with me? Just because your friends say it would not be? Could I trust you with my life? Or would I see you holding a knife? Would it Just be me? Could you lie to be free? Do you love? Or do you Hate? Can you be healed? Or do you kneel? Can you say I love you to me face? Must you hide in a certain grace? Now you say it's all over, but instead it's just a four leaf clover. I loved you before, but now it's no more.
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Mar 27, 2005 2:49:46 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 2:49:46 GMT -5
Yet another one....
Was it true, When you said, I love you? Did you mean it when, you said it then? Would you say, It just to obey? All the hugs, Where they just for mugs? Did you trust me, When I said it would be? Could you believe me, To say it was just a simple key? Could you trust in what I said? Just to have a piece of lead? Is that what you think of this? When you first said Miss? Do you love me, like you could be? It was just a lie, To get me to sigh. Are you so blind, you can't use your mind? Now it's over, So you think you're a clover. Please tell me, if you would be, my one and only. You are my love though You may not see it so, I must tell you once and forever, You will be my never ending lover. I love you.
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Mar 27, 2005 12:53:40 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 12:53:40 GMT -5
I didn't know I could write like that! It surpises me! lol
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Mar 27, 2005 13:54:02 GMT -5
Post by lostloves on Mar 27, 2005 13:54:02 GMT -5
What would you say, To make my day. Would you say it in a bit? Would you love me, for who I am to be? Would you be true? Also true as the deep blue? Do you know why, I had to buy, My love towards you? Did you have to, Bring such death to my spirtit? Could it be, The way you see me? Was I just, Some fake trust? Could it have been When we had seen The many waves of life? Then see you holding a knife? Was it you? Or was it me? And now I bid, You Good Bye. You had said I loved you. How can I trudtyou now? Farewell.
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Mar 29, 2005 17:44:27 GMT -5
Post by Mullet Fish on Mar 29, 2005 17:44:27 GMT -5
Awesome. I'm so bad at the poem things. God knows I've got the material to write one, I'm just bad at it. I prefer fictional writing, as in books and roleplays and such I think these are quite good myself.
Brad
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Apr 17, 2005 16:20:55 GMT -5
Post by Tanon on Apr 17, 2005 16:20:55 GMT -5
*Nods in agreement to Lighter.* This is good stuff. I myself can't do sad poems too much. I just don't seem to have it in me. It's actually getting kind of disturbing by itself.
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Apr 29, 2005 23:46:32 GMT -5
Post by insanity on Apr 29, 2005 23:46:32 GMT -5
I think I can only write poems (crappy ones) when I'm very hyper or really bored. ONE of them was good, but I forgot it AND my friend helped me. Actually, she made most of it.
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May 27, 2005 23:28:32 GMT -5
Post by Ravenmaster on May 27, 2005 23:28:32 GMT -5
We had to write lymriks last year in 6th grade and this was mine...I was hyper! ;D *hug tackles Insanity*
Ahem...
A Jellybean went to the zoo he saw a fish, and a bear too I saw a woodchuck gave him a big buck and the woodchuck hopped like a roo!
We were supposed to write about our favorite candy and I like jellybeans!...JELLY BELLIES!
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